Birds and Freedom

Over the top of the trees and the tall buildings,
The floating clouds of orange and grey colours,
Dawn dapples through to break another day!

The birds and squirrels here and there
Chirping, cuckooing and squeaking,
Above and below move, jump and fly!

Freedom is the birth right only to them!
No restrictions there in their freedom;
The happy state of life to dream about!

The Sun rises and sets to give life and light;
The divine animal, cow gives milk for everyone;
Likewise many living beings do many things

Man has the choice to contribute better;
But don't know when that day will dawn,
When like birds all can fly in freedom!

Reviews

[Botania]

A tribute to birds, little animals, and life. Well done John.

[Lauriegirl]

This is an excellent write,and I absolutely love the message here. Good job

[R Smith]

A lovely rhyme flows towards a message for mankind, very well done John, its excellence is in the way it flowed into that end.

[Moonie]

An amazing message!.....bravo!!

[Patrick]

This is a nice piece..straight to the point, but deep with feeling as well. bravo