Sleeping with Me

I will sleep tonight,
deeply within you,
sweet angel.

I shall sleep tonight,
accosted by demons,
sweet devil.

I am sleeping tonight,
dreams do not disturb this
sweet rhythm.

I am a bodily whole,
a perfection of myself ,
sweet maker.

Tomorrow, awake,
I will dream of you,
sweet lover.

Reviews

[lovelife]

This peice is differnet thought it would be more mature based off the title but like they say never base a book off it's cover

[Sometimes Blood]

This piece was quite interesting.

[Botania]

Takes speech and breath away.

[Mary C]

My friend..this is an exquisite and lovely write. I love your poetry so much

[Anne Timmins]

A beautiful poem. Such a wonderful way of expressing can only be applauded. Awesome

[Alfred Kukitz]

Deeply within you, best line in the poem. Good flow. Your wholesomeness is found in both sleep and awake. A very pleasant read!

[Naysan arif]

Its very good.. loved it :)

[Jon Roggie]

Nice. Great rhythm. Like it.

[Susan Beth Horvath]

This is a masterful write with a flowing rhythm that astounds me. AWESOME!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

dreaming asleep, dreaming awake...love makes us feel perfection...

nicely done in short sweet strokes.