Standing in Line for a Broken Ride

So many people crowd this place, their brainless activity polluting my space,
i feel it is time to take action, though i am afraid it is too late

Why don't you use your motives to help the ones that really matter,
in the end all those showoffs and fakes wont entertain you,
stop your nonsense and show yourself to a piece of this planet that doesn't have an extension cord, or an outlet

you will soon realize there is an outside to the walls that surround you and soon the time will come when those walls collapse or you climb over them,
if you don't prepare now, you will get crushed in the end,
and there will be nobody left to pull you out of the rubble,
no anticipation,
your few bridges have been covered and now they
light the sky, your bridges have been set ablaze,

do you take back what you said, take back all you gave away,
step up now and take what you deserve, your spot in hell has been reserved,
there you can insult the true heroes as they swim in paradise,
don't you wish you were in paradise where all your troubles would vanish away,

"I am done with this place, i never want to go back, i am done with being stuck alone, with no outlet"

Reviews

[dukovan]

i appreciate your lack of capitalization, it shows the times. Not laziness, but urgency, letting everything that does not matter slide. I have faith in you're vision, life can always start up new. We're in a temporary time of conformity and misguided ambitions. Lets change towards perfection, its in every direction.