New York Times

How Cops Look At You In New York #Racist # Discrimination

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New York Times
Come Listen To This New York Rhymes
Where Every Day You Hear Or See A Crime,
Where Cops Don't Greet You
But Shoot You To Ur Death
For Piece Of Treat They Thought Was A Piece
F*****g Preach Where Is The Truth In This
Their Never Be Peace With A PigG
Who Greedy For Donut & Got Coffee Stain All Over Their Piece
Like Who Yall Street Pro-formers
Im Not A Gangsta
Im Young Observed Feller
Who Make Any One Look Stupid For The S**t Yall Do
I Walk Threw The Hood Like A Criminal
Come Bac Out Like A Smooth Criminal
Where N***a Eye A New
Feller With Hands Signals
Like Who Dat
F**k I Look Like
Better Pay Attention Like You Knew Dat
I Feel Pain For This Youngsters In The Street
Who Ain't Make It To 21 Yet
In This Dirty South Street
Where Guns Are The Main Attraction
& Drugs Are The Reason They Ain't Feel The Pain & Affection
Parents Cant Get To Their Heads
Preacher & Teacher Are Jus Worry About Their Profit
Ain't Dat Some S**t
Im Outta This S**t

I Cant Stand This World I Live In
SomeTimes I Feel Like Jus Running Away
But Dat Aint The Answer U Feel Me

Author's Note

How I Been Look At In New York

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

This conveys the energy and frustration very well. Your style is brisk and snappy, with an upbeat tempo to a decidedly not upbeat subject. Your style is your own, and I shall not comment on that - sometimes it feels a little "over the top" but perhaps that is entirely intentional.

[OnePiece]

Is A Spoken Word Poem , I MAde It While Listening To A Nice Musc BEat I Herd Playing In The BAc Ground So I Went Along , & Yes It Is Thanks My Friends
& I Will Improve On It

[Ruth]

I think this would suit rap well...be interesting to hear it :) x

[Yours Truly]

it's different to me.. but i like it, that's how it really is in some places. keep it up :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow of thoughts. I like the real life feel in the words. Life seem a dead-end ride sometime. I believe hard times make us stronger and less fearful. This would be very good verbal poetry. The words are strong and alive. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[OnePiece]

Yes thanks my friends & i agree too , wish i can only teach this in the street but if i do i get summit & harrass for spoken words u know & thanks u once again