I Know Exactly Who You Could Be

I Know Exactly Who You Could Be

A Story by OnePiece
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Now A Days Young Women Feels

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I know When A Women Is Afraid OF Loosing Her Self ,
I know When A Women Is Afraid Pretending Not To Be.
I Know When A Women Have Had Enough
I Know When A Women Is Quiet
Cause She Scared OF What She Have To Say & Hide
So She Smile,
Me Knowing A Quick Conversation Tell Me Their More Then Meet The Eyes
I Know When A Women Lie
Jus To Be  Attach ,
I Know When A Women Sacrifice
For Her Sake ,
I Know Y'all Women Live Under House Rules
Where Rules Are Made To Be Broken ,
I Know When A Women Needs
Cause She Feeds Of Others
I Know When A Women Feels Empty
Trying All This New Things Jus To Feel Plenty,
I Know When A Women Need To Feel  Love
I Get It , I UnderStand Your  Feelings
I'm No Different From You
Don't Get The Wrong Expression,
I Don't Wanna Do You Wrong,
But I Gotta Do Me BeFore I Show You Love & Affection.

© 2013 OnePiece


Author's Note

OnePiece
How I See Young Teen Moms & Grown Women Be Like

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I like it. Putting aside the fact that I would switch out women for women - I understand why you did it that way, but said aloud in my head I would say woman - very thoughtful piece

Posted 11 Years Ago


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