The attacks were shameful and shocking. Still those tragic images brings anger and tears. Your words echo the sentiments of the what all civilised citizens all over the world feel. The rhyme is not playful way to make the verse sound rhythmic, there is sarcasm, pain and poetry all laced together. More power to you. Great work.
My heart goes out to all those innocents who suffered. Trouble is, I've seen it all before and therefore pray for the world, not just Paris.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
I know.. I´ve thought about it too, but praying for paris dosen´t mean you don´t pray for the wor.. read moreI know.. I´ve thought about it too, but praying for paris dosen´t mean you don´t pray for the world or have sympathy for everyone affected by terrorism. For this poem I chose to wrote about the paris attack, thank you so much for reading it
This is a fabulous piece of poetry. I also feel bad for the Paris attacks, and I me and my family are praying that me and my big brother's uncle and cousins are okay, since they live in Paris. I like the way you organized the poem together, and the rhymes are good too!
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
thank you lydie, all the best to your family, hope they are in saftey. Terror is horrible.
I´ve started to post most of my poems on my facebook poetry page instead. If you like my work, feel free to check it out: https://www.facebook.com/johannamagdalenapoetry?_rdr=p
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