A breath of fresh air

It was really windy today.. made me think about the wind and I wrote this.

You were like a breath of fresh air
Fluttering through my clothes
But you´d disappear
When I needed you the most
Suddenly so close touching my skin
But my heart would get so cold
When I let you in

You were like a breath of fresh air
Fluttering through my veins
But you´d disappear
and nothing good remains
Wandering through the street
Without you I couldn't breathe
I´d search for you stumbling uphill
But the world remained still

You were like a breath of fresh air
So powerful and strong
With you rippling through my hair
I felt like I belonged
You left me fragile and bare
When you faded and died down
You were a breath of despair
When I think about it now

Author's Note

What do you think? :)

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Looked like a great tribute to winds. Very touching & smashing poetry it is. You capture the real nice moments of your life in words & then swag ov'r 'em nicely. So poetically. Winds've been onf the beautiful thing of nature which kiss the carnal peace of life, deeply with softness. Excellent work. Enjoyed reading your poetry!