All my thoughts

All my dreams were hard to share

I was scared they wouldn't come true

And they said they did, but they didn´t care

so I hid my soul from view

and I´ll be kind, I´ll be patient

Waiting for the world to shift

Hear my heartbeat as I´m waiting

I know it might always be like this

All my thoughts and desperate prayers

I was confused, alone and lonely

So hurt beneath all my protective layers

Just like the rest of humanity

and I´ll be wise, I´ll be brave

Waiting for people to transform

The sad memories you don´t need to save

Light a candle so all hearts stay warm

All my wishes can seem meaningless

But I´ll never surrender to feeling small

I know there´s much more than all of this

Look at the sky and wait for a star to fall

Reviews

[Laura Harrison]

this is so beautiful and poignant and i think everyone can relate to this poem at some point in their life (i especially loved the 2nd and 3rd stanzas)

[Misery]

Carefully chosen words of loneliness, and beautiful thoughts to share.
Well done, dear poet.

[Johanna]

thankyou so much

[Misery]

Much welcome.

[Kayleen]

wonderful. so many intricate emotions laid out so perfectly and seemingly effortlessly. you should consider publishing something

[Johanna]

Thanks so much Kayleen :)
I want to.. but it´s hard.. I don´t know who would want to publish my poems

[Kayleen]

any publishing company that does poetry books might consider you, I'm not sure. but you should find a way to share your works as you have a great talent! i can't believe english is not your first language, you use it beautifully!

[Johanna]

thankyou so much for the support.. I´ll look around.. I don´t know how many people would read poetry in norway.. but it´s worth a try. It´s my dream one day to publish :)

[Kayleen]

omg! your from Norway! thats amazing!! i really really want to visit there someday. you can publish it in another country if Norwegians aren't big poetry fans!