I wrote this last night before falling asleep.. hope you like it :)
Why is your heart so restless? It beats hard beneath my fingers Is this for the best? In the air your question lingers I should say yes But I do not know The words won´t leave my lips While your heart keeps beating on Underneath my fingertips
You look me in the eyes and say you wish It didn´t have to be like this I reply with a kiss We never were good at goodbyes We move apart with care I can hear your heart from over here We are no good Not together or apart Hopelessness in the air of love so misunderstood The beating of your heart Echoes were you stood
This is quite a brilliant deep piece hun.
To hard to be with them, to hard to be without them.
Allot of hurt in this piece, allot of heartache and sorrow.
I like the end part, you ended it well.
Heartbreaking emotional piece, but I quite enjoyed it anyway :)
Keep writing :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
I´m glad :) yes I tend to write sad .. sorry about that
glad you liked it :)
10 Years Ago
haha that's fine :)
I did.
your more then welcome :)
I´ve started to post most of my poems on my facebook poetry page instead. If you like my work, feel free to check it out: https://www.facebook.com/johannamagdalenapoetry?_rdr=p
Hope you have .. more..