Not very wise

Got inspired by the radio again.. what do you think?

It´s a cold, cold night

The dark is coming fast

I can feel the warmth fading

I put my palm against the glass

There are pictures on the windowsill

I gaze at them, the world goes still

and down my spine a freezing chill

Loneliness is going in for the kill

Look how happy we were

In those warm days

But now your happy with her

and I´m out of place

Do you kiss her eyelids

Do you tell her the same things

Does she believe you like I did?

Not very wise

It´s a cold, cold night

All my walls have not been rebuilt

I can feel the warmth fading

The place that I had has been filled

There are pictures on my windowsill

I gaze at them, my heart goes still

I used to have so much time to fill

Now all I have is time to kill

Look how happy we were

In those warm days

But now your happy with her

and I´m out of place

Do you kiss her eyelids

Do you tell her the same things

Does she believe you like I did?

Not very wise

How would you feel

If I walked up and said

You shared my dreams

You shared my bed

I gave you my trust

you broke it, and gave it back

Now we are just

A pictured painted black

The person that gave me true loves kiss

Was there, but now he no longer exists

The pain, I can't even describe it

You didn't even bother to apologize

Never love a stranger

It´s not very wise

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

You have a beautiful, powerful way of capturing the depth of emotions... even of the painful experience of others... All these glimpses of life, and wonderings of love's longings, feel so melancholic. Love should last forever... :(

[J Johnson III]

Love this poem, good job. If it is a true story I apologize for your heartache. I have been there before.

[Johanna]

Thankyou :) no not about me, but I know people in that situation and decided to write a poem for them

[J Johnson III]

Well great job!