Look at us now

Look at us now

A Poem by Johanna
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This poem is a mystery, it just came right after jogging haha

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You were never somebody I expected to love

but look at us now, look at us now

You were never somebody I expected to let go of

But look at us now, look at us now


I don´t know how

It happened

No one ever does

Was it because

I loved you too much?

So the world threw rocks at us..


Until we broke

Until we never spoke

Until we were strangers

Until we never kissed again

Oh, look at us now

Remember us then

© 2014 Johanna


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I didnt expect the bittersweetness - I expected a happy ever after ending and you did a great job of obscuring the end until ...welll..the end lol.
People love to stir up trouble when others seem happy in this world. That is wrong!

Posted 10 Years Ago


A good reflection of thoughts..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice working!!
Well done!


Posted 10 Years Ago


love comes and goes but one day the real thing will come along
don`t rush it ,it comes natural

Posted 10 Years Ago


Words stop me till the end and after the read, It bound my thought. Great write. Thanks

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sometimes you think that your pain is unique to you, until someone else expresses it. Simple and powerful. Nice work, I hope things have been well with you on the other side of the world :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Thankyou, all is well now over here :))
that was very sad,, and i love it.. you done a very great work here,and the repition made like an cho in my head. well done johanna :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Love itself is like on and off light bulb, the soon we understand it's much better.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Words drizzling like in this beautiful work. Heartwrenching and saddening but still I see survival in this.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Johanna
Johanna

Norway



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