Won´t you let me

Wrote this last night

Why do you say that you´re broken?
You´re not broken, just lost
and a heart in pieces isn´t the cause
If your heart was broken you wouldn´t love
and I know that you do
I know that you do

If you are lost, why are you running?
You don´t know were you´re gonna go
Just don´t go away from me, why do you have to?
When you know I love you too
You know I love you too

Why did you tell me there was no use?
Am I not worth your time?
Now that I have expressed my feelings
and made them rhyme
Being scared might be the cause
That´s what happens when your lost

Won´t you let me hold you?
If you want I´ll be just a friend
Wont you let me hold you?
Until you find yourself again

Reviews

[Saddam]

Its a beautiful and interesting write dear friend. I like it much.
Keep sending me more your great write dear friend.

[Johanna]

thankyou so much, happy you liked it :)

[Saddam]

Your welcome dear......

[Anita Singh]

You always write great poetry. Keep on writing. Good job!!!

[Johanna]

Thankyou :)) good haha, I can´ stop :) xo

[Anita Singh]

You gotta believe! Its true!

[Emily]

'If you are lost, why are you running?'
Love this line and this poem!

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i think is not completly sad. on the end is hope maybe all be again good. i like rhyme rhytmus make poem very enjoyable.

[Johanna]

thankyou :) and thankyou for reading so much of my work, makes me feel happy :) have a good day :)

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you wellcome. have lot of sunshine at west coast.

[The Twin Arenas]

Sad. These are the saddest poems.

Keep on truckin'

[Johanna]

I know sorry haha, I always write sad.. don´t know why, it´s easier than happy sometimes cause happy often becomes cliche so fast :) thankyou :)

[Avinash]

Love when it turns into a storm we see a waves after waves splashing you from different directions. You are confused and unable to see. Sometimes you hold something and sometimes you float away. The writing is emotionally vivid and anyone who has been in love can relate with it.

[Johanna]

thankyou avinash for you reflections :)

[Mayank]

sometimes we think friendship is an alternative to the person whom we love, maybe it is. But it doesn't work.

[R Smith]

a sad but very beautiful poem Johanna, you are a friend indeed to reach out this way, people can be lost and need someone to guide them through hard times, you would be a great guide, thank you, great work.

[Johanna]

thankyou for your kind words :)

[stars are far]

omg that was so sad, i know i can relate to it, it was wonderfully done..really , just made me sad ..remind me.. hehe, everything will be fine one day..;

[Johanna]

I´m sorry for that :/ everything will, it always does