Won´t you let me

Won´t you let me

A Poem by Johanna
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Wrote this last night

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Why do you say that you´re broken?
You´re not broken, just lost
and a heart in pieces isn´t the cause
If your heart was broken you wouldn´t love
and I know that you do
I know that you do

If you are lost, why are you running?
You don´t know were you´re gonna go
Just don´t go away from me, why do you have to?
When you know I love you too
You know I love you too

Why did you tell me there was no use?
Am I not worth your time?
Now that I have expressed my feelings
and made them rhyme
Being scared might be the cause
That´s what happens when your lost

Won´t you let me hold you?
If you want I´ll be just a friend
Wont you let me hold you?
Until you find yourself again

© 2014 Johanna


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Its a beautiful and interesting write dear friend. I like it much.
Keep sending me more your great write dear friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Johanna

9 Years Ago

thankyou so much, happy you liked it :)
Saddam

9 Years Ago

Your welcome dear......
You always write great poetry. Keep on writing. Good job!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Johanna

9 Years Ago

Thankyou :)) good haha, I can´ stop :) xo
Anita Singh

9 Years Ago

You gotta believe! Its true!
'If you are lost, why are you running?'
Love this line and this poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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i think is not completly sad. on the end is hope maybe all be again good. i like rhyme rhytmus make poem very enjoyable.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

thankyou :) and thankyou for reading so much of my work, makes me feel happy :) have a good day :)
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10 Years Ago

you wellcome. have lot of sunshine at west coast.
Sad. These are the saddest poems.

Keep on truckin'

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

I know sorry haha, I always write sad.. don´t know why, it´s easier than happy sometimes cause hap.. read more
Love when it turns into a storm we see a waves after waves splashing you from different directions. You are confused and unable to see. Sometimes you hold something and sometimes you float away. The writing is emotionally vivid and anyone who has been in love can relate with it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

thankyou avinash for you reflections :)
sometimes we think friendship is an alternative to the person whom we love, maybe it is. But it doesn't work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


a sad but very beautiful poem Johanna, you are a friend indeed to reach out this way, people can be lost and need someone to guide them through hard times, you would be a great guide, thank you, great work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

thankyou for your kind words :)
omg that was so sad, i know i can relate to it, it was wonderfully done..really , just made me sad ..remind me.. hehe, everything will be fine one day..;

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

I´m sorry for that :/ everything will, it always does

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Johanna
Johanna

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