Maybe I know

Diary of the heart.. I don´t know.. the words just spilled out.. didn´t know how to make it into a structured poem so I just left it as it was

You said you were so happy to know me

But do you really know me?

Sometimes I don´t even know myself

You said you were so glad that we were free

But are we really free?

This world has made it hard to tell

and I don´t wanna wake up tomorow

Heavyhearted

Before the day has even started

Pushing back my sorrow

Because it doesn´t make sense

Do things ever make sense?

Maybe I know that I don´t belong here

Maybe I know that I´ll always be on the outside

Why is it so? am I just too scared?

Too confused, all the white lies

Maybe I know that I can´t tell what love is

Maybe I know there will always be something amiss

Maybe I know that all good things end

Maybe I know that new things begin

Maybe I know that I can´t lose hope

Cause what do we have then?

Reviews

[misha]

Such a beautiful piece with so many questions to be answered. Great job!

[MAC]

a nicely done write giving us a raw view into a moment of life. excellent!

[Johanna]

Thankyou Mark! :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Nice imagery. Life`s surrounded by uncertainties so, we are locked into the shells of it. But the word "May Be" always work for the best!! I enjoyed reading your poem.

[Johanna]

Thankyou so much :))

[Wórdsmíth]

Welcome ;) Can I ask, do you write only poems?

[Johanna]

No.. I write poems, songs, crimestories and short stories. :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Sounds very good. You seemed very creative.. Do you upload your songs and stories on this site? ;)

[Johanna]

Yeah.. there are some there.. But I mostly get feedback on my poems, I don´t know if my stories are any good :) But I´ll find them for you if you want to read those who are here :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Pleasure to know. Well.. yeah.. I can write you some reviews on POEMS but i`d really love to leave some reviews on your stories too along the side because i`ve got a craze of reading stories and if I find you great in that i`d keep continuing reading your stories and if not then i`d keep your hand over my heart and say... "Oh, Johanna" is so creative.. (smile) And what about songs? ;)

[Johanna]

Some poems are songs, so that´ll be up to you to tell which ones, but they are all labeled as poems :)
Some stories on my profile are "Tuesday 10:33" and "mostly black" which is the very very first thing I put out on the page, so you´ll have to press the "last" buttom at the bottom :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Oh ok, I got it and hey, thanks for suggesting me some names of your stories, it`s very helpful to me to pick up the right stories .. thanks. I actually write poems and would love if I could make my career in literature field someday as a professional writer. What about you? Do you like literature? How much? ;)

[Johanna]

I really like literature..and read a not, I´m gonna be a journalist and a reporter, start studing this fall so excited to see what the future brings.. I think literature and my love for writing will come in handy in that field.. :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Sounds good. Journalist and a Reporter? Impressive. I like Journalists, they`ve got some great sense of humor and Yeah.. their figure`s always appeared in an equillibrium position and that`s what I love about them. And I hope, your figure`s too balanced.. (smile)

[Sami Khalil]

Very raw and heartfelt emotions. A lot of good questions to ponder.Excellent..:)...............

[00000000000000000000000..]

I loved this you gave some hope in this write to those whom feel the same, I will say I am one. Thank you for sharing :)))))))))))))

[Anita Singh]

My favorite lines:
I don´t wanna wake up tomorow
Heavyhearted
Before the day has even started
Pushing back my sorrow
Because it doesn´t make sense
Do things ever make sense?

Although I think the last stanza should be worked on a lil bit by omitting some "May be's".

[Johanna]

Hm.. yeah I was a little unsure about the last one.. do you have a sentence in mind? Didn´t quite get what you meant by "May be´s" :)

[Edward Lancheister]

hope is the essence of strength to revival for this desperate situation. i like the imagery that you express among the words. i think there a miss type at the line "Because it dosen´t make sense", maybe you want to write "because it doesn't make sense". thanks for share :)