Nobody Knows

Nobody Knows

A Poem by Johanna
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"..but the color of love nobody knows..."

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NOBODY KNOWS

Twilights fades fast

It´s like I can´t see the sky

Fragile like glass

A heartbreaking goodbye

A gray that is fading as distance grows

But the color of love

Nobody knows

 

Longing is black

I can´t see where you went

Sorrow is white

While reason is transparent

A gray that is fading as far as time goes

But the color of love

Nobody knows


The orange sunrise

Such beauty wasted

The depth of green in your eyes

Before the regret you tasted

A gray twilight is fading as the stars are exposed 

But the color of love

Nobody knows

© 2014 Johanna


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THE colors of our world l;ike the colors of our emotions are varied and repleat Nice to see you again

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

10 Years Ago

ah well you are young you have forever
Johanna

10 Years Ago

yeah.. but I missed it, just added a new one just now :)
Tate Morgan

10 Years Ago

you will go on to write into your aged youth as we,ll and one day you will look back and treasure th.. read more
I love your picture representation of feelings. Like a painting with a void somewhere; no color for love. Good work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


"The depth of green in your eyes
Before the regret you tasted " .. The orange sunrise gets reflected in these lines. Beautiful poem, I think, I really love the way you write some refreshing poems. Very Beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is delicious reading, I can sense the words almost with my body, like a primal cave painting of a poem. I am a fan of your writing, though I Did not recognize you in it, and that's what I like the most. The use of color and the weaving of dreams, these colors fade but always repeat in the lives of others again.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Love the rhythm and how you phrased your work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is very well written. Love the repetition and the idea is unique. Love the ending. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Listen to you, going deep as usual lol.

The last three lines are the highlights of an already beautifully written piece of poetry. Your skill level is increasing; I should know, having read your earliest poems as well.

A gray that is fading as far as time goes... wonderfully written, Johanna. You only improve, in vision and craft.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Its flow is like a beautiful song and choice of words quite soothing to the restless hearts.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Such awe within these words. Nicely written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very cool; great job!! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on June 7, 2014
Last Updated on June 9, 2014
Tags: Twilight, fast, fades, glass, grows, love, knows, color, gray, white, black, longing, goodbye, time, goes

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Johanna
Johanna

Norway



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