yeah.. but I missed it, just added a new one just now :)
10 Years Ago
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"The depth of green in your eyes
Before the regret you tasted " .. The orange sunrise gets reflected in these lines. Beautiful poem, I think, I really love the way you write some refreshing poems. Very Beautiful.
This is delicious reading, I can sense the words almost with my body, like a primal cave painting of a poem. I am a fan of your writing, though I Did not recognize you in it, and that's what I like the most. The use of color and the weaving of dreams, these colors fade but always repeat in the lives of others again.
The last three lines are the highlights of an already beautifully written piece of poetry. Your skill level is increasing; I should know, having read your earliest poems as well.
A gray that is fading as far as time goes... wonderfully written, Johanna. You only improve, in vision and craft.
I´ve started to post most of my poems on my facebook poetry page instead. If you like my work, feel free to check it out: https://www.facebook.com/johannamagdalenapoetry?_rdr=p
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