I´m Human

"Another one I´m not sure about.. had a moment of inspiration, and I think everyone feels like this in a sense some days.. feel free to share your thoughts."

HUMAN

Hide my feelings inside
Don´t tell anyone
That I lied
That I cried
That I tried
But my hope died
That I hate my pride

Don´t tell anyone

That I´m human
That I feel
I´m human
The mask I wear isn´t real
I´m human
So many faults and fears
I´m human
Look at my face
Do you see them there?
I´m human
Tired of playing a part
I´m human

I´ve got a heart

Hide my feelings away
There is no other way
They´ll know I worry
Know that I dwell
Know that I think for myself
Know I´m deserted
Know I´m hurting
Know that I won´t love again

Know that I´m human

Reviews

[Anita Singh]

Oh man! This is too crude and heart wrenching! All the feelings poured into one single piece. I so loved every bit of it.

[Johanna]

wow, thankyou so much!! :)

[Neon]

A human's not a thing made up of a "Machine" ...he has heart. A heart which's a beautiful thing itself in this bad world. The stress, pain, hurt, love, worry-hurry, honey with money in a day sunny and much more ..everything walks hand in hand with the world. He's got a life and one day, he'd leave his body..would be mixed up with air, water, soil, rain and with the cold winds. So, i'd say, here you left a lovely message that we all gotta live stress free and help everyone because we know it very well that we won't be here forever! I know, you've indirectly tried to send a mail to everyone so that they could know, "if they're humans then a man who've got his life's also a human."

You know what, Pretty...Money's a vital factor here in a human's life and in today's modern world, i'd say, "yes, Money's Must!" Now Just Imagine! If a man has no money, his pocket is empty then how he would be able to fill the beautiful dreams of his angel even though he can never date a hot angel without money. So, Money's must and we can earn money just
with the help of our skills and the skills should be optimistic. (Just an example!)

Here in this poem, may be, you've write by getting inspired from your own life or may be from other real life.

Well, Pretty..as you know very well, that I hate seeing angels feel bad and cry so, tell her don't feel bad and don't cry, Neon hates seeing angels get cried, tell her everything'd be good with the time. Here's a link of that girl

http://www.writerscafe.org/uploads/stories/37185fefec26bf892b6ed6e266750af7.jpg

(I hope, she'd be smiling hearing my words!) Lol

I love your all stuffs but this poem's touched my heart because you've here poured all the pain of a human into only one statement that's... "I'm also a human!" Brilliant Job, Miss Norway!

If you keep running with your this running success then am sure the day's not that far when you'd touch the sky (and yeah yeah..of course, you'd get a chance to meet "Mr. Hot celebrity Neon".. (Kidding)

Keep up the great job, Pretty! ;)

[Simon Welsh]

Brilliantly written. Keep it up!

[Johanna]

I will, thankyou :)

[max_vonnegut]

I really like this a lot. Especially the first set of lines. Although they were short, I think they were simple and honest. This was another great poem, good job!

[Johanna]

thankyou :) Glad you liked it :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Another amazing write hun.
Something all of us im sure can relate to.
You have written it out beautifully.
Its true we all feel these emotions, because we are both human and you describe that well.
Brilliant little write as per usual.
I enjoyed the read :)

[Johanna]

Thankyou! yeah.. I like it when poems are relateable :)
Glad you liked it :) thankyou for your kindness as usual

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your most welcome hun anytime :)

[Avinash]

The fact is the moments when we are overwhelmed with strong emotion, those are the ones we actually live. Rest of the times we are merely acting for others. It's beautifully reflected through your poem.

[Johanna]

I agree, thankyou :)

[David Burke]

This is wonderful hun, one of the best works I've read on here. this describes, I think, most everyone on earth. it definitely describes me pretty well. you have a copious amount of talent my wonderful friend; well done :)

[Johanna]

wow thankyou Ryan :) your so kind, glad you liked it :)

[David Burke]

You're very welcome hun :) and thank you for saying I'm kind

[Sami Khalil]

"Know that I dwell
Know that I think for myself
Know I´m deserted
Know I´m hurting
Know that I won´t love again"

Humans are fragile and they go so many trials and tribulations. A constant foght within and without. We rise and fall. We swim and drown...A touching poem...:)..................

[Johanna]

"We rise and fall, we swim and drown" you really are very wise and awesome sami :) Express yourself even in review so so well, thankyou so much :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you kindly...:)...................

[Anand Sehgal]

Hide my feelings inside
Don´t tell anyone
That I lied
That I cried
That I tried



I am bowled by the honesty shown in these small lines. The write spoke of our very mortal, brittle nature to me .
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[Johanna]

thankyou. Glad you enojoyed the poem :)