Talk

"So this is actually a song.. but it works as a poem as well. I´m actually kind of proud of this one, hope you all enjoy it <3 Maybe I´ll record me singing it one time for you guys. Let me know what you think."

Here is a link to me singing it finally, like I promised. Hope it´s allright, made the melody up on the spot but as long as the voice is not too catlike we should be all good :D

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gURicLOcUPE&feature=youtu.be

TALK

No I don't wanna talk anymore

Don't ask me to talk

We're not gonna find a cure

Making our way around the block

 

We don't talk like before

Words yes, but the meaning bailed out

Haven't you noticed?

We have nothing to talk about

Don't talk to me

Don't talk to me

Don't talk to me

Don't talk to me

Don´t

 

No I don't wanna talk anymore

I´d rather be silent

Did I say something stupid or

was that not what you meant?

 

So many words wasted

So many words spent

So many words faded, dead

All of the words we said

 

Don't talk to me

Don't talk to me

Don't talk to me

Don't talk to me

Don´t

 

No, no, let it go

I can´t hear you anymore

I´d rather be deaf

That fight when there´s nothing left

Don't talk to me

Love don´t you see?

There is no love

There is no love

There are no words

no words..

 

Don't talk to me

Don't talk to me

Don't talk to me

Don´t

Reviews

[David Burke]

This is awesome kido :) I'd love to hear you sing it

[Johanna]

thankyou :) will be up soon :)

[David Burke]

You're welcome :) and looking forward to it lol

[Johanna]

the song is up now, right above the poem :) sorry for it being so late!

[David Burke]

It's ok lol

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Smilessssssssssss I like it:) and yes lets hear you sing it:)

[Johanna]

thankyou :) Will have it up soon now! :)

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Ok email me when ya do:))))))))))))))))))))

[Johanna]

the song is up now, right above the poem :) sorry for it being so late!

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ok:)))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Simon Welsh]

Flows well as a poem and as a lyric. Brutal.

[Johanna]

thankyou :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I would love to here you sing it sometime hun It would make an awesome song.
It has a deep powerful meaning to it that simply says, that things aren't quite how they use to be between two people. Things are different and its gotten to the point where there's no words left to say.
Great write hun I enjoyed the read :)

[Johanna]

Yes I will add it up soon :)
Thanks :) Glad you did :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your most welcome :)
and great :) I can't wait to see it :)

[Johanna]

the song is up now, right above the poem :) sorry for it being so late!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

yer thats fine :)
I think you're voice is great, and the song sounds amazing, its even better put into a song :)
Truly brilliant hun :)

[A. Amos]

Singing deep in my mind, don't talk to me....:)
Can't wait to hear the song in his full glory, proud of you my friend...

[Johanna]

Thankyou Amos :)

[Johanna]

the song is up now, right above the poem :) sorry for it being so late!
it might not be full glory, did it fast but it´s better than not uploading it at all :)

[Devesh]

Brilliant, as always. One of your best works! Can't wait to hear this one! :)

[Johanna]

Thankyou Devesh :))

[Devesh]

You're most welcome, Johanna :)

[Johanna]

the song is up now as promised, right above the poem :) sorry for it being so late!

[Avinash]

Does not seem like you wrote this in one of your best moods but the words do hum like a beautiful song and may go well with a guitar but do upload the song once get time to record.

[Johanna]

I will, thankyou :) I was in a good mood, that´s the irony of it.. I just tend to write really sad and serious

[Avinash]

I see .. :)

[Johanna]

the song is up now, right above the poem :) sorry for it being so late!