Too Thin

Too Thin

A Poem by Johanna
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"I thought I could do this, but what I have learned about myself is.."

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Could this be anymore difficult

You´re wearing me down

Why are we even talking when there´s no result

We've become the laughing stock of the town


I thought I could do this

But what I have learned about myself is

The walls of my heart have grown to thin

Too thin, too thin, too thin

I've lost hope that I could win

The walls will just break if I try to let you in


Could this be anymore complicated

You called me again last night

You have no clue how long I´ve waited

To hear you say those words

But now it´s not right


Because I can't reply like I did before

Things are no longer that simple

and you're waiting for me to call

Can I trust you, I don't know


I thought I could do this

But what I have learned about myself is

The walls of my heart have grown to thin

Too thin, too thin, too thin

I've lost hope that I could win

The walls will just break if I try to let you in


The doors are closing

Can´t leave myself wide open

I´ll only get hurt, I´ll only get hurt

The promises we made

I wasn't supposed to listen to what they all said

Are we love? or a mistake?


One more word and the walls are gonna break..

and I thought I could do this

But what I have learned about myself is

The walls of my heart have grown to thin

Too thin, too thin, too thin

Too thin

© 2014 Johanna


Author's Note

Johanna
I´m sorry I´m adding way to many poems too fast, don´t mean to spam your pages. It´s just I get all inspired and I get help but sharing them right away.

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A amazing use of words. You told a story and led the reader to a very good ending.
"The walls of my heart have grown to thin
Too thin, too thin, too thin
Too thin"
Above lines made the poem complete and understood. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Thankyou for being forever kind, and reading my work. :)
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Can't believe I am the first one to review this out of the 58 people who have read this. Well, I love it! Its like you read my mind! So many conflicting emotions all at once! Great write! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

wow thankyou :)) congrats haha, I usally get lots of review on some, and none on the others :P :)

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Added on February 18, 2014
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Tags: Thin, Heart, Walls, Me, Love, Hurt, Do, This, Win, Open

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Johanna
Johanna

Norway



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