This is a powerful, truthful, emotional and deep piece.
I love the whole meaning of this hun. Its very true its over there only two words although the relationship could still not really and truly be over.
Well written hun i enjoyed this :)
When we are in love more than the person who we love ; its the way that person make you feel in love with yourself. The person is gone nevertheless the love and you both stay on...and if we are able to put this feeling into perspective we are unlikely to feel pain for anyone leaving us alone.
You're clearly a person of few words. The few that you do write, precious. It's beautiful in it's simplicity, yet devastatingly powerful. Thanks for posting, you did a great job! Turn this into a song! :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Wow thankyou Devesh! :) Yes.. I´m thinking about doing it.. glad you liked it! :)
10 Years Ago
You're welcome! Don't forget to post the link to the song when you're done. :)
I´ve started to post most of my poems on my facebook poetry page instead. If you like my work, feel free to check it out: https://www.facebook.com/johannamagdalenapoetry?_rdr=p
Hope you have .. more..