Voicemail

Voicemail

A Poem by Johanna
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"Try again later.. or leave a message at the tone.."

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VOICEMAIL


There´s no one home

I know you're not

But even if you were

You wouldn't pick up


I am all alone

But I don't have a choice

I leave a message at the tone

It´s the only time I hear your voice


You say hi, It´s Taylor

right now I'm not home

But try again later

Or leave a message at the tone

and I'll try to get back to you


You didn't get back to me

and that´s the end of this tale

I kept trying with an apology

But only got your voicemail


I left one last message saying

I love you so much

Tried to add more coins

But I didn't have enough

Just wanted to hear your voice

But you didn't pick up

© 2014 Johanna


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this is very deep, and sad, but I love it

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

thankyou :)
David Burke

10 Years Ago

you're welcome :)
I feel the raw emotion behind the words, Johanna. I'm touched. You conveyed the pain very well!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Thankyou :)
Just wanted to hear your voice
But you didn't pick up

Well written, clear expression of feelings, can visualize, nice poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Thankyou Linda :) Yeah I like the visualizing style.. or so people tell me :)
Linda alexander

10 Years Ago

You most welcome
The anticipation for an answer, the diappointments of no answer. You have described that marvelously...:)............

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Thankyou Sami :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).....................
Awwww so sweet romantic and adorable. All about missing someone terribly and you cant reach them, and how disappointed and depressed it gets you sometimes.
This was my favorite part:
I am all alone
But I don't have a choice
I leave a message at the tone
It´s the only time I hear your voice.

Brilliant poem loved it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Yeah it is really sad sometimes! :/

I´m glad you did, happy valentinesday Cimmy :)
cimmy wuv xxxooo

10 Years Ago

so it would be :(
Awwww thank chu :) you to :)
Awww this is sweet I like this, Idk how many ever done that but I have:) I have seen it played many ways to just a happy moment to that very special person passed away in your life. I loved it:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

I´m glad :) Thankyou
0000000000000000000000000000

10 Years Ago

Very welcome my friend:)
The great pleasure of this poem lies in both the remarkable illustration and the emotions invoked from it; a deathly combination of lyrical skill and sorrowful story.

You write good poetry, Johanna Magdalena.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Thankyou Scott ^^)
Its heart wrenching . The details which are otherwise non-descriptive in this tale of fading love have come back to life.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Thankyou avinash :)
This is a great poem. The feeling of loss, hope and longing were depicted so well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Thankyou Elina :)
Elina

10 Years Ago

You're quite welcome!

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Added on February 13, 2014
Last Updated on February 13, 2014
Tags: Phone, Voicemail, Message, Pick, up, Voice, Tone, home, alone, choice

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Johanna
Johanna

Norway



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