Lovely

Wrote this during english class.. what do you think? :)

What a lovely person she is, they said

What a lovely life she´s living

Locks of sunshine on her head

As she walks outside in spring

What a lovely person she is, they said

With no scars, nor a bad memory

Graceful eyes, lips of red

With the whole world at her feet

What a lovely person she is, they said

Without a burden or a care

With a heart that has never bled

The girl that has never cried a tear

What a lovely person she is, they said

She has every answer

With a bright future up ahead

How lovely it must be to be her

what a lovely person she is, they said

Beautiful, lucky, loving, free to fly

With wings ready to spread

They thought as she passed them by

What a lovely person she is, they said

Though they never bothered with hallo

Just words, just words, until the words were dead

Cause her they didn´t even know

Reviews

[The Nude Writer]

What a lovely poem this is :)

[Johanna]

thankyou :) Glad you liked it :)

[Saddam]

Though they never bothered with hallo
Just words, just words, until the words were dead
Cause her they didn´t even know
The other person see only what we want to show them but they did not understand what we feel. This is a very nice poetry.. love to read. Great read and write.

[Johanna]

Thankyou :) Yes that is kind of the message... never to judge someone before you really know them.. there´s always a reason for a person being the way that person is and yeah.. thankyou for reading and reviewing :) very kind of you :)

[Saddam]

you are welcome dear.

[Luke L]

hmm very interesting piece! I like the idea of it

[Johanna]

Your fast, just added this, thankyou :)