Fear

Fear

A Poem by Johanna
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Read about WWII before I went to bed..and I just can´t fall asleep, so I wrote this..

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FEAR

"
Read about WWII before I went to bed..and I just couldn´t fall asleep, so I wrote this..
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I look calm
But I´m screaming inside

It is loud
They forced silence to hide

It was beautiful
But all the flowers died

I might look like a soldier with a country to save
But I´m not brave, I´m not brave

I might be standing with my head high
Like I allready forgot and forgave

But I´m really running

Fear is coming
Fear is coming

© 2014 Johanna


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You did a fantastic job of writing this from someone else's perspective. A hauntingly sad read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Thankyou :))
I can feel the intensity of what this soldier is facing. Wow, just wow.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Thankyou Arzel :)
Somehow we all are attached to our collective past even before our birth in some clueless way. May be it is genes, reincarnation or spirits but whatever it is; the intensity transcends through generation and it is integral to human psyche.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

thankyou for your thoughts and review avinash :))
Wow Johanna this was very very beautiful I read 2 times out loud its amazing:) What makes it so beautiful is it speaks from the heart:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Wow :) thankyou!! :))
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10 Years Ago

I'm serious this is a poem needs to be shared with every man woman faces a life in war:) Its amazing.. read more
Great piece very intense emotion

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Thankyou Luke :) Glad you liked it :) I was kind of uncertain on wether to put it up or not

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Added on January 28, 2014
Last Updated on February 5, 2014
Tags: Calm, Inside, Silent, Loud, Save, Brave, soldier, Forgive, Still, Fear, Coming

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Johanna
Johanna

Norway



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