Words

I´ve been having a writersblock for a while now.. the words just wouldn´t fall right.. so I wrote this.

Words
Gathering in the air between us
Words
Follow me as I get on the bus
Words
Mixing in with my thoughts
Words
Set the line, the line was crossed
Words
Falling down like summer rain
Words
Stepped on in the lane
Words
Concealed as feelings in my chest
Words
Causing the worst when they hoped for the best
Words
So powerful, so powerless
Words
Writing them down dosen´t make them real
Words
Come out empty, when their meant to heal
Words
Slip out, can never be unsaid
Words
Gathering in the air as I lay in bed
Words
Joyful, painful, like the ones we said

Author's Note

I just wanted to say Thank You, to you all :)

Reviews

[Devesh]

Thanks for sharing this, lovely read! If you're singing this one, please do an a-cappella version as well, I would love to see how this one pans out! :)

[Johanna]

Sure, I´ll see what I can do :)

[cycy]

this is great and it reminds me of one of my poems entitled "Word' its about times when you just can not find the words to write and as a writer that is a major problem coz your words are more or less a part of who you are. well written, i liked this poem.

[Johanna]

Thankyou for your review :) I really agree.. the words really are, really happy you liked this poem :) thankyou for reading :)

[Neon]

Yeah! What a powerful write on 'Words!'
I adored this write because this write does really work in everyone's life, if we do take some time thinking alone in a corner of a room then we'll realize what 'WORDS' do, how they make an impact of us in our day to day life when we do walk or when we do stop and so on. Very nice and an interesting write. You know what I loved these lines much, have a look

Words
So powerful, so powerless
Words
Writing them down dosen´t make them real

Wow! What the beautiful and so real lines you used into the poem!
So, now after reading this I think I should thankful to a most beautiful girl of the world that she made this write and shared with all of us to make our days. Thanks for writing the poem :)
That's why I always call ya beautiful because your beauty's just reflecting from your stuffs. Keep writing and Hey, of course keep smiling as well :)

[Johanna]

Aw this review was wonderful, I´m so thankful, thankyou so much for your kindness neon! :)

[Jack...]

This was great Johanna. I like the format of this piece and the message it conveys. Very nicely done.

[Johanna]

Thankyou Jack :)

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

This would definitely be a shanty of the working poet! Beautiful!

[Johanna]

Thankyou Shane :)

[kumars]

nice rhyme words joyful, painful like the one we said..ever..nice poem l like you for beautiful words.

[Johanna]

Thankyou kumars :)

[Black Cat Fever]

Good job, really. I like the format of this.
This expresses for me the real truth and power of words and their limits sometimes.

[Johanna]

Thankyou :))

[Hailey Shay]

I love this! I feel like it truly expresses the heart of a true poet! Words! Fantastic job, keep it up!!

[Johanna]

Thank You so much

[Edgar Perez]

After reading this, it's like... I just want to write you down, because you are the words falling apart, but kept close and held together.. You are absolutely wonderful. Love your work! (:

[Johanna]

Wow, thankyou so much! you made my day, thankyou for all your kind words :)) Glad you like my work :)

[Edgar Perez]

Aw no worries. I really am sincere when I say you have a really nice and smooth way of letting your words flow. I believe that should always be acknowledged.