I´m not lonely

I just wrote this poem right now, I felt lonely. Emotions on paper is just better than having them overflow inside.

I´m not lonely

I´m just alone right now
Your the only one I want to see
but your in another town

I´m not lonely
I´m just a little scared
Maybe it was too much the things I shared?
I´m not lonely
Just a broken heart waiting to be repaired

I´m not lonely
I´m just sitting on my own
Looking at people
Heart, soul, skin and bone
Are you lonely?
You should come home
I´m not lonely
Just a rose growing through stone

I´m not lonely
I´m just confused
All words are wasted and used
I´m not lonely
I was just wondering where you were
Pen and paper
I´m not lonely if that´s what you think
Just wondering why I´m writing with saltwater
Instead of ink

Reviews

[noone]

I liked it and I think it was a good choice for it to rhyme, although the phrasing was off as was he meter of the poem. I reccomened trying to making your lines more even lengths.

[Johanna]

thankyou :) sure, I´ll try :) thankyou for the tip :)

[A]

No one's alone. But even when we know that, we sometimes feel lonely and it hurts very deeply. I love your poem! And what a perfect ending!

[Johanna]

thankyou! so nice of you

[zainul]

Superb write.
Enjoyed these lines most.
"Just wondering why I´m writing with salted water
Instead of ink"

[Johanna]

:) I acually like that part best as well:)

[zainul]

This is my pleasure,dear poet.:)

[Sami Khalil]

"Just a rose growing through stone"
That image is wonderful and struck me as such. A lovely write.

[Johanna]

thankyou :) :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)................

[Laura Harrison]

This is such a lovely poem, I especially loved your use of rhymes, well done :)

[Johanna]

thankyou :)

[sonnie ibadah]

wow! your poem has the power to connect to loners like me who hide amongst the crowds. Yeah, we all have our lonely days, some of ours are just longer than others.....very emotional, very beautifully, written.

[Johanna]

Thankyou

[sonnie ibadah]

you're welcome........

[DrD]

I have missed Norway since I last left it. I visited there many times and it was always difficult to leave and became an addiction to return. I completely understood this poem and liked the intimacy of it and how it was constructed. A very worthy read completely enjoyed.

[Johanna]

Thankyou DrD:) Yes, it is a beautiful place.. You should come back one more time ^^)

[Anand Sehgal]

how sweetly written. Loved the yearn of a bit more care :) tender write :)

[Johanna]

thankyou :)

[Neon]

Yeh ... Absolutely the piece made much sense, i just endured the content of the poem. The word 'Loneliness''s wafting right from the torment of one word to the torment of other. Great lonely poem that's written right from the depth of the heart . . . But .. If you don't mind, may i ask, why are ya feeling so lonely????

[Johanna]

Thankyou :) You know just one of thoose days.. I miss my family and friends, I´m not in Norway right now and it´s usually fun to travel, but sometimes you just get really homesick..

[Neon]

Welcome :) Oh ... now i can understand how lonely you are. Very emotional poem, May god keep you happy and wash away your loneliness from your. Thanks for answering dear, Johanna.