You don´t have to look at me

You don´t have to look at me

If you don´t want to anymore

I´d rather not see

the hatred in your eyes

Just my voice, when we talk

I can hide every sign

of the deep sorrow that you would have seen in mine

 

You hate me

But it´s madness

Hate is too strong a word

I´m only overwhelmed with sadness

Eyes that Hate, that are empty, where is your flare?

You´re just a shadow of yourself

I can´t hate someone who´s not there

 

You don´t want to look at me

So why are you still standing here

Words mean nothing now

They loose all meaning when you don´t want to hear

Vanish into thin air

You never did listen

The man I loved, I miss him

He would never have hurt me like this

Why pour poison in your kiss?

 

If only I had known

If only I had seen your shadow then

I wouldn´t have loved

Freeze my heart to stone

I don´t want to look at you

Never again

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Neon]

Ah! I hate seeing someone as beautiful as you feel tired and get hurt by someone, Don't be sad, Johanna .. you looking awesome and pretty when you smile ... forget them who hurt you and give you pain at all because there's not a worth of those people in your beautiful life... Keep smiling!

Anyway, it's a nice poem just came from your nice heart, it's an emotional one again but yeah! It's a great poem where you've shown your frustration to someone who hurt you right into the depth of your smooth heart. The theme's painful but realistic as well... nice choice of words. Keep writing!

[Chris]

Hard words to finally say. Catching your breath must be hard.

[Avinash]

Every thing good comes with an Expiry Date..Unfortunately Love too. The transition and realization phase of its no longer there is the hardest. Beautifully worded with different shades on Melancholy.

[Johanna]

Thankyou :)

[Latifa]

You´re just a shadow of yourself
I can´t hate someone who´s not there
really powerful words there

[Johanna]

Thankyou :)

[Lauren Aurora]

This is such a beautiful poem, you are a great writer. :)

[Johanna]

Thankyou Aurora :))

[Lauren Aurora]

Your welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

"The man I loved, I miss him

He would never have hurt me like this

Why pour poison in your kiss?



If only I had known

If only I had seen your shadow then

I wouldn´t have loved

Freeze my heart to stone

I don´t want to look at you

Never again'

Lessons we learn , bends we turn , moments we burn... A sad but a very good write...:)