Who I loved

 

I will tell you the story of when we first met

It´s been long since we talked about that

And through these full packed days it´s easy to forget

Who I loved, and who loved me back

 

I´ve always been clumsy, at last it did me some good

I bumped into do you, and you dropped your phone

I said I was sorry, more times than I should

And before I knew it I stopped feeling alone

 

You´ve never believed in love at first sight

But after that day, you changed your mind

Now I find love beside me every night

Still strong, after all this time

 

We´ve been working so hard, building a life

We almost forgot how to live

Now I say forget all problems, bills, hardship and strive

Let me just hold your hand, let time stand still

 

Do you remember our first kiss

All the memories we share

That we made on our way here

I´ll miss my figure, and you´ll miss your hair

But besides that everything is the same

That is a fact

Tomorrow I´ll tell you again

Cause through these full packed days it´s easy to forget

Who I love, and who loves me back

Reviews

[Laura Harrison]

What a wonderful story about true love. Excellent write! :)

[Johanna]

Thankyou :))

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Well put in the lines...the marriage is an every day task...does not just belong to that day...as some suggest...but a lifetime commit...and communication...I did have a question in the first stanza:

I will tell you the story of when we first met
It´s been long since we talked about that
A through these full packed days it´s easy to forget
Who I loved, and who loved me back
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I will tell you the story of when we first met
It´s been long since we talked about that
Through these full packed days it´s easy to forget
Who I loved, and who loved me back

I beleive its the same as you said in the second to the last line - just wanted you to know...