It Was

All I knew was my love for you

Love that had lost it´s worth

Now we were just two lonely people

Sharing a bed, with their feelings hurt

Lying next to a stranger, with the past in my hand

Looking for love in a deserted land

Guess we couldn´t resist

Drowned our sorrow in hope that didn´t exist

I didn´t want to be given up

We always said it would never happen to us

Now saying goodbye is supposed to help

Do we have to?

When being together is like being by ourselves

We are going nowhere

But without you, where do I go?

I just know I need you here

Even if it just causes us pain

There has to be a way

To take the past back again

You want to love me

But I move away from your touch

I want to say something

But it´s all too much

Just don´t say it wasn´t love

When we both know

It was

 

 

 

Reviews

[zainul]

It gives pain when love flies away
It is hard to forget the memories that come in the way.

Wonderful write.
I congratulate you Johanna for presenting such a meaningful piece!!!

[Johanna]

thankyou :)
this piece means a lot to me, and I´m glad you liked it as well :)

[zainul]

You are welcome,my friend :)
I am very fortunate that I could reach to your heart through this piece.
I felt a special attraction when I was going through this.
This is really an awesome work.:)

[Sami Khalil]

A good read and write...:)

[Johanna]

thankyou :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Zap-the-awesome]

Great work, once again.

[Johanna]

thankyou :)

[Zero_Edge88]

Tears that run in our face do leave marks like no other when we feel our heart is broken. We don't see it but we do feel it. The contours of a broken heart is one that can never be shaped easily even in pen and paper. It's a sad song, but it has to end.

Though we must keep the dance alive should we find ourselves a partner worth dancing too. This is what it means to dance as if no one is dancing. Beauty is where the longing heart shines on those who seek love and find beauty in it.

We can't take it back or keep a small piece because we find it too hurtful but we do our best to make a space unlike no other because we still think it's still theirs. We are filled with faults like no other but we also express a love like no other anyway.

It was real but now it's not. It was all there but we have outlived it. This is life and love on a different scale unless we find our way to balance it out then we will dance again in beauty and enjoyment.

[Johanna]

Nice reflextions :) I´m impressed by how poetic your reviews are, you should make this a poem or something :)

[Zero_Edge88]

Thank you, :) it is a response of which poets respond to. We respond with lines and stanzas; words and phrases; and thought and emotion. Your words and mine resound to how I reflect on it :)