Almost

This is a little love poem that I originally wrote in my native language, norwegian. I translated it to share it with you guys. Hope you like it.

A look

A feeling

A hope

A thought

That´s what she got

It was almost love

Almost

 

A beating heart

A line of lovely words

A dream

A blue sky, blue waves

That´s what he gave

It was almost love

Almost

 

A boy

A girl

Together, alone

To cry, to laugh

I like you

Yes, no

It´s what they wanted to know

It was almost love

Almost

Reviews

[annabellee]

Beautiful write, I loved every single line :) You're very talented.

[Johanna]

Thankyou so much! :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I quite like this one :) keep writing hun keep up the great work :)

[Johanna]

thankyou :)

[NebraskaHope]

Love it!

[Johanna]

thankyou! :)

[Zap-the-awesome]

I liked this. It was simple but still deep. Almost love has to be the true definition of bittersweet

[Johanna]

Thankyou, yeah I agree.. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the free verse style and the formatting of the words...there is the flow in this...that flow of love that was "almost."

[Johanna]

Thankyou :)

[Miranda Richard]

Such raw emotion and powerful words! Well penned :)

[Johanna]

Thankyou :)

[Miranda Richard]

Sure.

[Rahul]

No errors, no mistakes, no faults and no any grammatical hecks. Lovely write, and i can't believe that in a one day you'd made so many poems, last day i read your one did you remember when you said that you're new here ? and now i appreciated it that you're now improving and trying to make yourself out. good and congratulations.
i liked this piece, this poem'd contained so much rhyme and i'm mad at your this way to writing...hey, if i'd a suggestion to you, i want to say, write enough writings and especially when you write poems then write in this rhyming way, i loved your rhyming way...!
lovely write, sorry, i couldn't read your story...but as i get my time i'll read that story..keep writing.

awesome write and very lovely and romantic sort of writing a bit. :P

[Johanna]

Thankyou :)

Yeah, I mostly write on rhyme, this one is a little diffrent, I know.. but gotta change it up a bit sometimes you know ;) Glad you liked it anyway :) and there will be more poems in my rhyming way^^)

I´m glad you want to read the story! :) But keep in mind it´s a crime story, not exactly as romantic as this ;)

Have a nice day Rahul! :)

[Rahul]

don't worry if that's a crime story, don't be scarry after read your that crime bluster story, i' won't gonna be kill you or stab you....lol :P