I´m fine

 

I never wanted it to end
Just keep, keep pretending
I didn’t wanna cry
Just keep, keep lying
what is the reason why

You stopped trying

I’m fine, I’m okay
Yeah we’re both all right
They wouldn’t know, I wouldn’t say
That you left last night

 

Now all I´ve got is empty halls

And I didn´t, didn´t want that

A home became just windows and walls

and outside it´s pitch black

then my mother calls

asks me how I am

 

I’m fine, I’m okay
Yeah we’re both all right
She wouldn’t know, I wouldn’t say
That you left last night

 

Can´t find my heart

I´m lost

Can´t find the one

I used to trust

Remember, you said

It wouldn´t happen to us

Not to us

But I wasn´t enough

 

I’m not fine, I’m not okay
it´s not all right
they wouldn’t know, how could I say
that you left last night

 

I pace on the floor

On the shattered pieces I have left

I´m not me anymore

I don’t belong anywhere

When I pictured my future

I pictured you there

 

Will I ever be fine?

Will I be okay?

How can this be right?

When you’re not mine

When you didn´t stay

when you left last night

 

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

The words make me feel like the writer was in one of those spots that is all comfortable, but too normal.

[Johanna]

nice :) That´s what I was going for :)

[Zap-the-awesome]

I love the rhyming and the flow in this is extraordinary in my personal opinion. Fun to read, and that's not something I say often.

[InsanityWriter]

I love the rhythm of this one. (: It conveys the feelings perfectly. Excellent job.

[Johanna]

Thankyou! :))

[Tate Morgan]

Young love seems always to be as disappointing as it is rewarding. Yet we all participated.We all suffered heart break.But I doubt we would ever give it up to be alone. It is the price we pay for loving another. Once a person has experienced love and rejection it makes us care more about how we treat others as well. These trials all help us to be the people that we become. I wish you well.Trust me it will pass and you will love again.my guess is sooner rather than later.

[Johanna]

Thankyou :) Put not to worry, I´m not going through a heartbreak or anything.. it was my friend who was heartbroken, and I wrote this inspired by that, kinda of "Putting myself in her shoes", but what your saying is so true, it is the price we pay for loving another person.

[PurpleQuartz]

The flow in this poem was really good! And the emotion was really strong! Great writing!

[Johanna]

Thankyou :)