When we feel so alone look inside not around.

loneliness can haunt till what it seems it breaks you down completely un-coherent. well we have to dwell and introspect read this all the while.

when we feel so alone so down look inside

 not around 

Feeder of my decline, thinking 

disapparent yet.

Do tears light thy page a morrow

spin endlessly those heaven unbounding planetary

aimed coins of content.

what do your pages speak.

Inscription  what is their

intent?

The pain of external wears a deep grooved 

  mask etched with the hollowness of suffering.

the spark running these machinations 

really rest at night and times of 

relaxing.

No faze to the rapture only

haze in mid September

under over all enveloping.

Strength of honesty valor of dynamics

 hush there is no more suffering...

Come back around!

listening to some feeder songs while writing this free hand at night

(in my trusty Notebook)

In another menty ward

Sigh...

The  wheel eh?  

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

oh wow... this gave me chills... I have been here and can relate on several levels.. what does light our page?.... when we take that deep look inside ourselves and let things "pour" onto the page what is our intent?... what will we see?... what will others see?... those "aimed coins of content" do spin and have a way of coming back to us.. it is that "wheel" that gets us... I love everything about this write.. the flow, the unique and stunning way you word things... the meaning and messages hidden... wow.... I will definitely be back to read more works, and hope you don't mind but will also be sending this to a few of my friends... this is amazing writing...
again, nice to meet you:)

[Joe_VILOT_]

just chuffed AprilRN210 thanks and am very much delighted you loved/love everything about this.
read morejust chuffed AprilRN210 thanks and am very much delighted you loved/love everything about this.
Your works are prtty brill as well.
Thanks and have a swell time writing some more works.
cheers joe.

[AprilRN1210]

site ate the rest of your words, but it was honestly a pleasure... :)
you are more than welcome...

[Joe_VILOT_]

yep noticed that. no matter though what happens is that it actually kinda overwhelms the computers cpu with a flood of emotion and it isn't able to handle that because they're not supposed to feel emotion are they?

[AprilRN1210]

guess it is too much to handle for such machinery... who knows... I am technologically challenged at best... they laugh at me, so I just tip toe around and hope it does what I ask it to do.. :)

[Joe_VILOT_]

Hah! well technology is too advanced.... leave it undiscussed for now. It may be more freaky if machinery had emotions, think you?

[AprilRN1210]

too advanced for me, for sure... think I would be in worse shape than already am, they already have a wicked sense of humor:)

[Joe_VILOT_]

maybe they aren't all they're cracked up to be,hope your not reffing to me as a machine,since i've never heard of a computer comedian before =+>

[AprilRN1210]

haha!... I wasn't referring to you, no.. but that made me giggle, so comedian it must be:)

[Frieda P]

Your machinations are not so incoherent, think we've all spent time dwelling in these rhymes. Gotta kick out of the ending 'menty ward'...yep the wheels never stop churning. Have no clue what deeharlotp is, you Brits have a language all your own. Enjoyed!

[Joe_VILOT_]

oops meant to be something else thanks for that though even when i make up words which i do mistakenly did it now. Cheers Frieda :)

[AprilRN1210]

haha... I admit, I googled this "word" and thought maybe it was slang... made me giggle girl..

[Frieda P]

I know right, need a special dictionary, did you know that bumbershoots were umbrellas? ha....love that word.

[AprilRN1210]

Lmaoo... guess I can say I learned something today:)