lighting bolts,starry eyes,souls aglow

love across an unreachable divide?

Lighting bolts,starry eyes,souls aglow 

starry eyed staring,  out across a

raven so deep the jagged forks of 

quick pulse the landscape glowing in an' out

dances to a rhythm felt first

then heard. Heard through the bones of granite

and late upon the part we came so ?.....

too late might be added yet we would just

shudder with the burden of the lies 

of a curse never to fall in love the reapers

scythe sweeping the soft touch of electric shock.

yet underneath a storm is brewing

reason of ours fate thrown to the 

extremes of rawness and timidity rain lashing hell bent scream

not yet spent. The rain feebly patters against

such an unleashing of fury.......

Yet is not the reason assunder when all

belief faith hope is then to the core

of it ripped inside out?

Isonotic tones all around.......

love indeed the foolish game yet as we/they

look across the ravenous gain feeling desolation 

and despair and pondering if they are the only one 

to feel,who feel this pain not just for love

companionship for unity of this sacred land 

the whole...... 

Author's Note

listening to this when i was rewriting it
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wT6I4J4gFHg
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vkUpfw4Hf3w
enjoy

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

another awesome write that left me feeling several different emotions... those electric shocks are never gentle to me.. but can relate on so many levels of this.. and ask myself the same question all the time... is it a foolish game?... am I the only one who feels this way?.... am I the only one who longs for the companionship and unity?.... I try not to let the "belief/faith/hope" get "ripped inside out"... ouch... I guard it closely and carefully.. always nurturing that "flicker" that I am able to maintain.... I still want to feel that rhythm, that dance, keep those stars in my eyes and the hope in my heart... well done.. I thoroughly enjoyed this one!

[Joe_VILOT_]

yes thank you again April what is that fuels the flicker? to make it so it won't even be moved in the gale force of a hurricane or the tremors of the earth even thrown into the sea it will not be extinguished? how this works figure this out then maybe tell me O)
p:s don't worry if you can't i'll tell ya if you am bamboozled.

[AprilRN1210]

my passion fuels the flicker and my walls and careful embrace protects its fragility... with careful, meticulous care, the most beautiful things can come from the darkest of places... and the strongest of forces will bow to its glory... that qualify as "bamboozlement"?

[Joe_VILOT_]

yes indeed. A protector of her own and of her land they do bow down in the tranquil waters to see that far off place.......

[AprilRN1210]

indeed.... yep... that wondrous beauty that is in the distance that carefully leads you down the path of happiness.. only problem is the journey to get there:P

[Joe_VILOT_]

indeed happiness is more then can be summed up within the constraints of anything made or used it is more then just a concept. Happiness exists in nature though why most have fallen by the wayside is a mystery to myself.

[AprilRN1210]

because most have "blinders" on to where they only have one thing in their sights... and then when and if they finally get it they lost the lessons and the beauty in the journey and wonder why they are unfulfilled and miserable... shame...

[Joe_VILOT_]

yes hte journey is seeking the simple pleasures and strengthening your belief in yourself and others who are important to you in life those that have shared important lessons and have shown a message mabye clear for one thing or defined by another. Mine of course as well so use what you have and maybe this may happen one day....
The best kind of friend is the kind you can sit on a
porch swing with, never say a word, and then walk away
feeling like it was the best conversation you've ever had.

[AprilRN1210]

those simple pleasures are what make up the beauty of life... they are meant to be cherished, enjoyed, and stored away for the darker times to fuel that passion and hope... those lessons are meant to supply the knowledge and road map to get you to where you are supposed to be and the strength and wisdom to "handle" the roadblocks destined to try and thwart... and couldn't agree more... friends are in your heart and sometimes the best and most meaningful, touching words are the ones we don't have to speak.. we just "know" and FEEL...

[Joe_VILOT_]

how truly spoken, much to my dismay most of my friends if not all have passed on to a different place lighter darker i can not say what is the puzzles that are so delicately intertwined in a wrought iron chair a throne of such games, what does it mena i know not yet maybe it will be one where we were to converse so time maybe , maybe not?
Literal,figural that is my mark to depart is to embark and having this discussion i wish not to embark not yet not now.

[AprilRN1210]

I can respect that... careful not to get stuck in that chair... life is meant to be enjoyed, not "spectated"... :)

[Joe_VILOT_]

yes the chair is my trap frozen in time always analyzing, though still feeling on a mental level
read moreyes the chair is my trap frozen in time always analyzing, though still feeling on a mental level

a times .

[AprilRN1210]

apparently this "machinery" likes to eat your words....

[Joe_VILOT_]

yeah too explicit in emotion maybe its too hard to 'andle oh well the work goes on...and....on....an'....on........a.n.d....on.......
for now now.

[AprilRN1210]

yea well, such is life... for now.....

[Joe_VILOT_]

yes for now...
so it seems that is compassionate empathetic context.

[AprilRN1210]

so it seems....

[Joe_VILOT_]

yes so it seems?...
I wish for you to elaborate without seeming an Inquisitionor or a civil masquerader instead be kindly enough to think of it as inspiration from, a friend?

[AprilRN1210]

and to which do you wish for me to elaborate on dear "friend"?

[Joe_VILOT_]

well mabye something new like for example something which you could start as a draft of maybe a short story (can be about something totally random) which you could write a snippet of and then i could do my best to link it to my ideas(you can send this to me in an em@il) . comprende? si? Muchchas Gracias!

hrazhesht hima

[Joe_VILOT_]

this means goodbye in my mother tongue/language. the last part that is.

[AprilRN1210]

like a collab of ideas?

[Joe_VILOT_]

yeah what u think?

[AprilRN1210]

could work i guess...

[Joe_VILOT_]

o.k cool send me something when you get an idea could be a short line a verse or even one sentence........
If that suits you let me know through my mail.
cheers joe.

[FateDictates]

love the way you orchestrate words and set and stage scenes, all so very interesting..