The Rider of the Sky: Ruby Heart

A Book by CzatoftheMoon

I cant really remember where it all began... In fact... I see it all mostly in dreams. The face of the first pirates that attacked my home... and the dead face of the man who I owed my life...

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© 2010 CzatoftheMoon

Author's Note

The french words are in ( ) im doing all i can on this one bear with me

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Cynically

I loved the prologue. One suggestion though, space out the talking a bit to make it easier to seperate who's who in the dialogue. Also, it was very easy to follow along with, and good idea with putting the translation for the french included. It might be a better idea, to (instead of in the text itself), include the translation for the french at the end in your author's notes. Just an suggestion. As for the text itself, I'm looking forward to finding out what happens to the child, and who it was who reassured her she was alright.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on December 20, 2010
Last Updated on December 20, 2010
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CzatoftheMoon

Winnie , TX

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I am a writer of fanfiction and anime type storys but I could probobly write about anything I wanted. Dont expect much from me folks I dont think im any good at writing. more..