Deep write here. as for broken heart...i know both of it you speak of. which one is worse? I'll leave it to the individual to decide. neither one is a good experience. but as always, pain reminds me of this: do you know the one thing pain is good for? No? Simple, it lets you know, that you're still alive.
Yes, I know what it feels like. A broken yet beautiful kind of pain. *nodding head* I like how you can point out each emotion so simply- yet meaningful. *smiles* (:
Well...Unlike most people's beliefs, heartbreak is not always caused by the end of a relationship, or one cheating the other....
There are many things out there, that can break one's heart
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Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Indeed. And that is what I've tried to showcase in this poem. And this in particular shows how much .. read moreIndeed. And that is what I've tried to showcase in this poem. And this in particular shows how much it hurts to see a loved one ignoring .
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Deep write here. as for broken heart...i know both of it you speak of. which one is worse? I'll leave it to the individual to decide. neither one is a good experience. but as always, pain reminds me of this: do you know the one thing pain is good for? No? Simple, it lets you know, that you're still alive.
Love can create and destroy. It can make your spirit dance or sometimes leave your soul bruised!
Beautifully penned with honest tone!
Liked it very much!
haven had a broken heart far more times than I need to remember, I think of love poems as
the hard-plastic wrapping of the sliced cheese I purchased. What I mean is that nothing about it
is ever instantaneous. It is because pain and broken hearts take time "to be forgotten"/
I love this poem Joel. My only wish (and this is not at all criticism) is that those who concentrate
on writing love poetry would force (hell, even zap) new probabilities of destiny. Which is the same
as saying, I want it different than the next person. It's hard to write love poetry Joel. Because the
force of energy it takes to do it,( since love poetry is a spiritual act of review and contemplation)
has far more memory in it than instantaneous occurrence. But you have don't it well ...
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I'm Joel. Reading , for has always been an escape for me into my own world, my imagination mingling with that of the author's. Writing on the other hand is a new dimension for me, one which I.. more..