The Broken Hearted Girl.

After having an argument with someone who meant a lot, all I could think to do was write. So I did.

As I read over your words, those cold hearted words of unforgiveness, I realise that what we had was real, other wise you wouldn't be who you are now, you wouldn't be hurting the way I am. I understand you don't want to be hurt again, I don't either, but knowing there's a possibility me and you will never be an 'us' again is a painful thought. You promised me you would always be there, and I was a fool to think always meant forever. As more tears fall I know I should be strong, not just strong for me but for you. I hope life brings you the kind of happiness every person desires, or every relationship should have, or so I have read about in the books, but as we both know-from experience- fairy tales don't really happen in this world. I wanted to be the one to prove to you love can be real, and it was, I wont lie and say just because its over my feelings for you were one sided; I'm sorry I couldn't be the one to give you that happiness. Maybe one day, you'll look back and realise I really did care, because by pushing you away I was protecting you, I was protecting you from me, someone broken and afraid to be happy. I guess our chapters are finally over, that the ending wasn't really as predictable because we never found a way back into each others lives. Maybe we just weren't supposed to happen, or maybe we have another blank page waiting to be filled with the heartfull words of a Broken Hearted Girl.

Author's Note

Sharing my short chapters mean a lot, hardly anyone has read them but I have realised if writing is what I do and the only thing I'm decent at doing then I need to start getting it out there. Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Hakim]

A lot of heart has gone into this story/letter. The best pieces of writing might just be the sad ones because you feel it more. The happy ones are what we want in real life though, but it doesn't always work out the way we want.
Powerful s**t right here ;)

[JodieAnne]

It definitely worked out the way I wanted and needed it to. I guess you could say i'm one of the lucky ones!
Thank you so much for your review! Means a lot that you took the time to read my writing.

[Salvatore]

Hi JodieAnne,
I just read your story and the first thought that came to my mind was: "autobiographical?". I can tell you that this is not actually a story but seem to be more a letter.
It's nice, anyway, full of tenderness. Maybe it could be used as a start foe a story to tell; half reality half fiction.
Nice script.
Bye.

[JodieAnne]

It is like a letter isn't it! That's definitely what I wrote it for anyway, I wrote it to someone who means a lot. Thank you so much for all of your reviews.

[Amy R]

wow this was so sad! but again ur writing style interests me into reading more!
thanks for sharing :)

[JodieAnne]

Aw thank you! Really appreciate it x

[Amy R]

ur welcome :))
i'll be waiting for more stories! xD

[JodieAnne]

Really glad you like them! X

[hanir]

This is very true to life! So sad but true. Your story is almost the same as mine. ☺
Nicely written.
Keep writing!

[JodieAnne]

Thank you so much!