Dreams

Dreams

A Poem by Jocelyn Black
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Just random.

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People dream with open dreams,

colourful lights dance around your head,
with these beautiful dreams.
 
People dream with open eyes,
horrid pictures in your mind,
with these dark dreams.
 
Dreaming can be fun or dangerous,
with open dreams or open eyes.

© 2009 Jocelyn Black


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Jae
i agree with ZeN. its a very good poem.

~Rem

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very candid, I like that.. But I must confess that it seems as if you have more to say but are keeping it back. But its done in a good way, keeping the reader wanting more.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on December 14, 2009

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Jocelyn Black
Jocelyn Black

United Kingdom



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So my name is Jocelyn Black. I have a lot of free time as I got to college only 2 days a week. I'm studying to become a car mechanic. I'm always reading and writing. Poetry is what I writ most, but I'.. more..

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