I'm Waiting

A nameless girl waiting for her love to come back, but realises he won't.

I call out your name,

no ones here.

I search the house,

no ones around.

I sit down and wait,

I call out your name.

I'll wait forever,

In spirit and mind.

I walk out the door,

leaving my heart behind.

Reviews

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i really like this, i can relate

[shinybluestars03]

Great poem it reminds me of one of my own.
It has a lot of meaning in such a short piece
which i enjoy.
Thanks for sharing
Best wishes

[Coyote Poetry]

In so few words. A beautiful poem. I felt the yearning and the feeling of disappointment walking away. Thank you.
Coyote