drown

drown

A Poem by JoceMaria

Potential we all have 
the mental capacity to achieve we lack 
we drown in fear, belief, self doubt just like the non believers that doubted in Noah's Ark 
If there is something that these lonesome days have taught me, is that the more we hide in the shadow or our fears the less we see of life
we lose out on the true meaning of life's fulfilment 
the joys the laughter the warmth of never ending love 

© 2017 JoceMaria


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May your powerful voice sing above the storms that would create doubt and fear, those shadow things that bind us before we ever find the strength to rise up. We need to be made aware of the stumbling places, and no message speaks with such enchantment as the message of a poet.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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We must accept, that everyone is unique; and it doesn't mean that we should be evaluated only according to achievements. It's a myth, that anybody can achieve anything. On the other hand, it's certainly true that by sheer effort and courage; it's possible to exceed both our own expectations and those of others. Self-doubt, fear and hiding in the shadows, are certainly amongst the obstacles; which can be detrimental to overall success in life (as the writer has highlighted). It's a short write, but you've said a fair bit here.

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May your powerful voice sing above the storms that would create doubt and fear, those shadow things that bind us before we ever find the strength to rise up. We need to be made aware of the stumbling places, and no message speaks with such enchantment as the message of a poet.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wise words...truly said...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JoceMaria

7 Years Ago

Thank you 😊
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome. ☺

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Added on August 4, 2017
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JoceMaria
JoceMaria

Manchester, United Kingdom



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