bittersweet

bittersweet

A Poem by JoceMaria

your words, poison and yet so sweet 
your eyes, seductive and i fell deep 
your lips, softer than anything i have ever felt
your body embraces mine, like ice on a sunny day
it melts... with love, lust and thirst 
love because i love the way you make me feel 
lust because i know your love is not real 
and thirst because i hunger for that sexual connection 
something to bond us, the touch of your erection.

© 2014 JoceMaria


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I love your words , I love your style

Posted 8 Years Ago


"your words, poison and yet so sweet
your eyes, seductive and i fell deep

your lips, softer than anything i have ever felt

your body embraces mine, like ice on a sunny day"

Very precise. Powerful to the point of romance...:)........

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love because i love the way you make me feel,
lust because i know your love is not real....
well put together,great poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JoceMaria

10 Years Ago

thanks much appreciated :)
Very beautiful. Well conveyed...:)..........................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JoceMaria

10 Years Ago

thank you, glad you took time to read my work :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).................
Smilesssssssssssssss ssexy romantic to the point and bold I like

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JoceMaria

10 Years Ago

thank you :)
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10 Years Ago

Your very welcome:)

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Added on January 27, 2014
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JoceMaria
JoceMaria

Manchester, United Kingdom



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Sometimes, crying is the only way your eyes speak when your mouth can’t explain how broken your heart is... I write what comes to mind, and what i feel in that moment. more..

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