The Fall

Just some thoughts.

You cannot run,
You cannot hide,
It will find you,
Neither the darkness,
Nor the light,
Will shield you.
It will take you,
And when it does,
Love,
Your heart will be glad,
For there is nothing greater,
Than the fall.

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

So short but powerful - this seems kinda mysterious to me since this poem never explicitly states what it's referring to. This poem reminds me of short-lived pleasure, like ephemeral passions.

Great work.

[Joan*Eckhart]

Thank you.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

my pleasure xx

[SHEEMA HUQ]

perhaps an expression of autumn love, when love takes over your whole being, very good indeed

[Joan*Eckhart]

Thank you.

[I, Rene]

This took me aback with it's powerful stance, no escape it seems from love.

[Joan*Eckhart]

Thanks for reading. I believe you can't hide from love. It will find you.

[I, Rene]

I am a believer as well