Love is a Hurricane

I was captured
The moment I saw your face.
Beautiful,
You appeared to be.
But, you were a hurricane.
You nearly ruined me.

Author's Note

Reviews would be appreciated!

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

How sad to be at the receiving end, very nicely penned.

[Joan*Eckhart]

Thank you for your kind words.

[TheDarkKnight]

Sad yet awesome poem! It was short and sweet, and that's just the way it needs to be. It doesn't need to be longer. I love the emotion and the last sentence just left me in total awe. :)

[Joan*Eckhart]

Thanks for stopping by, Dark Knight.

[MOON]

Poignant short flowing write.striking imagery

[Joan*Eckhart]

Thank you.

[Lonesome Traveler]

It may be short, but it doesn't need to be any longer when the words are arranged so beautifully. Sort of captures the way love is so simple yet intricate at the same time. :)

[Joan*Eckhart]

Thank you.

[Purplerose]

I can relate this. Sometimes love drains you. :)

[Joan*Eckhart]

Thank you for dropping by.

[Ellen Henry]

Simple, short, meaningful. Nothing at all could have made it better!

[Joan*Eckhart]

Thank you.

[The Nameless]

Short and sweet, with lots of meaning =D

[Joan*Eckhart]

Thank you! This is actually the first poem I've written in years. I kinda just threw it out there. :)

[I, Rene]

sigh...love does this to me too. Short but so accurate somehow. It makes me want to apologize, well done.

[Joan*Eckhart]

Thank you. I actually wondered whether it was too short, but just left it. I'm glad I did.

[I, Rene]

it's perfect as is.