Trust

Trust
Do you know what it feels not to be trusted?
Not to be trusted by your Parents..
Not to be trusted by your Sisters or brothers...
Not to be trusted by your Grandparents
Not to be trusted by the one that loves you with all his heart
You don't have any trust with them, find it..
 

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow... here is a big subject.. trust! You have described something that many feel at all ages! Trust is something that so many have a hard time with.. we are in hard times and many are under pressure. Parents sometimes have a hard time trusting.. it may not just be you.. it may be fear of the unknown or stuff they are going through that you don't know about!

It's terrible when we don't feel trusted.. or any bad thought creeps in. Arts, hobbies and sports are great outlets to let work those feelings out.. constructively! Finding trust.. well the untouchable.. is not easy to sometimes find..and it's not always easy to know who to trust with your feelings.. here you feel like many don't trust. They say trust is earned.. but it's so easy to lose and hard to gain. The truth I think is many don't trust themselves these days.. therefore it makes it harder for them to trust anyone. Keep trying.. never give up on that.. if you have 2 great people in your whole life you can really trust .. then you are lucky.. Trust is a lifelong battle.. as there are so many good and bad doors.. and some gray where it's hard to decide sometimes. I hope things get better for you!

i dont have any trust with anyone so yeah,,,, i know how that feels..... Its really hard to gain trust back when the ppl wont let you...

[Brittney]

wow... this is really good! Great Job!

[Lizanne]

I believe that you just so graciously pointed out that trust must be earned. A wise and well written work.
If for some reason others do not trust us, maybe we have sent out the wrong vibes. Or maybe they just do not know the real you well enough yet. Keep writing you have much to say.

[Emily?]

Meka, This is really an amazing poem. Great Job!! =)

[*~Kristy~*]

Yes, I know exactly what it feels like...It hurts a lot... Especially when you've done nothing wrong.