Pt. 1

Pt. 1

A Poem by Jeremiah marshall
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Just to possibly get something going on this writing platform not the best but maybe it is to come...

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The beginning, a story on the rise
Opening the windows that block your eyes
...
Seeing the world in perspective
Climbing out unprotected
Unsuspective
...
Of the trials ahead
The difficulties that will haunt u
All instead
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Decisions for the old u say
Coming faster than u can think or pray
But then u sit
And realize
Its just the beginning
And you haven't even ventured out your doorstep yet...

© 2016 Jeremiah marshall


Author's Note

Jeremiah marshall
Ik structure is sloppy but maybebjust testing something out help would be much appreciated

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Added on April 5, 2016
Last Updated on April 5, 2016
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Jeremiah marshall
Jeremiah marshall

Norwalk, CA



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High school senior atm. Just looking to bring words out onto the paper to express ideas of the daily life of a teen. more..