FeAr My MoNtSeR fOrEvErMoRe

FEAR MY MONSTER FOREVERMORE

I’ve tried, I really did try. I tried to kill Monster but there was no way. Monster showed me the light of darkness and surprisingly… it felt like home. No pain, no suffering, no one to turn against you, just darkness, just anger, just rage, and destruction. The drug addition of hate, the savior and strength of my weakest moments, rage consumed my body and made everything seem right.

“I will only do for you, what you do for me.” Monster said to me. With no words from me, Monster knew I accepted as I smirked and light lowered my head with eagerness, wondering what we could possibly do together.

As me and Monster consumed each other, it felt like a snake bite entering my veins, never did I think that I would be here, but I’m glad that I did. This freezing feeling, numbing pain reliever, Monster is so cold, so very cold. I drop to my knees and lower my head to the ground as I exhale and see my breath in ninety degree weather as the coldness gives me pain like never before, but slowly perish along with anything that will have me feel hurt again.

Coughing a few times as I see my breath, I finally stand back up and take a deep inhale, then released. My iris in my eyes turn from dark brown to neo-blue and I now see the world in a different way. I now see the world for my taking. And if I don’t take it, I will destroy it.

Me and Monster is now one and we both gained something we both wanted. Me, I wanted his no conscious, his no emotion. But what he wants from me I don’t know. And really, as long as I got what I want, I don’t give a damn.

As I turn around I see a jogger coming my way. As he gets close to me, I give a smirk and nod my head, he tries to stop at once and falls to his back with fear of my eyes. I laugh, knowing I got what I want. I am now the Omen of Midgard, Earth made, neither from Heaven nor Hell. Guess it’s time to see what I now process.

 

Johnny Westbrook

Reviews

[R E Tree]

When I first started reading this I thought it would have been better if it was a poem instead of a story. But as I read more I changed my mind a little bit. It feels like you got your ideas from reading other poems. I like the picture it is very dramatic to me and eye-catching. I like anthing packed full of emotion and this is packed full and I have never felt so interested while I was reading it. It really did captivate me. Well done

[JENY]

very creative…..
I enjoyed reading….
Altogether a new style…..
Good….

[Sasha]

Interesting. Like the first monster, this sounds like the speaker is really young. I don't know if it was meant to come across that way, but that's the impression I got. My favorite part was where him and the monster had finished combined and his eyes change. That created the most vivid imagery and was even more frightening than the strong words of contempt at the beginning. I also like the part where he says, very simply, that he'll take the world or destroy it. As if it's just that simple. Good write, James.

[Liza]

oh the monster; how interesting how he's born...from weakness to strength from light to darkness; from goodness to evil...from silence to noise...from fear to unstoppable courage....hopefully the moster's rage causes no self destruction leading this to a construction of a powerful praise - expressive write. talent exists.

[Kaelyn Shea]

WOW!!!! i really really liked this one too! you did a REALLY awesome job! :) i like your monster stories. they are really cool