Fake

I want to be who I am
But it's been so long
I try to remember
But everything seems wrong
There are so many me's
Never just one
I feel so unreal, unfinished, undone
I could blame my ex, but that wouldn't be fair
I could blame my enemies, but they wouldn't care
I could blame my parents for getting a divorce
But that would be another excuse of course
No, The only person to blame is myself
Destined to be alone left sitting on a shelf

Reviews

[SmileBig :)]

Aww this is so sad but Its really good. Flows nicely, well done :)

[TomEYou]

Of the three posted so far, this one shows by far the deepest and most expressive emotions. The speaker in the poem comes across as hesitant and unsure. Intentionally or not, this seems to add to the symbolism of the work. For me at least.

[Nick M.]

We're teenagers we are always unsure of what's going on but yes I did try to incorporate a type of confusion/hesitation in the speaker. Thanks for the review!