Weather Lion

Another thing I had to write for English Class

The mighty roar of the lion is like thunder

His quick pounce on his prey is as fast as the lightning 

As he rips his prey apart just as a thunderstorm rips through a neighborhood  

Reviews

[C. Lee Battaglia]

I think it's awesome! Has very great potential!
Keep up the great work!

C. Lee Battaglia

[Akashi]

I think it's very good.

[PurpleQuartz]

I like it. It's written really well.