Classroom Blues

once again a poem about my spanish teacher

Walking and clowning with students

piles and piles of paper on her desk 

such a big mess!

Her "pretty face" is such a disgrace

she says we have a big test coming up ,

well whats next? 

I'm sick of it!

Her fashion sense is out of this world

Blue and purple does not match 

and neither does a tight purple leather suit with big black boots

She walks down the aisle like a whale on steroids

nearly tripping over a desk and killing a boy 

and plays it off by fastly walking off

She has such a potty mouth, please wash it out! 

Just go home and leave us alone!

Reviews

[Lady of the Lake]

LOL, this was hilarious :) I remember also disliking some of my high school teachers because they were a disgrace to themselves, haha - althought my opinions of them seems a bit harsh now. Although you're not asking for advice relating to school teachers, I would suggest you continue as you're doing and vent through your poetry as opposed to yelling in her face :P
Now to the poem: I thought it was entertaining, first of all, so of course I enjoyed reading it :) I can't say much about structure or anything like that because I'm definitely no poem - all I can say is that I thought you did a very good job.
Keep up the good work! :)

[Fiereblackitten]

you said "moth"