His Mystic Angel

A fog

a mist

and a light tapping sound

He looks in the mirror

to see a face staring at him

but it wasn't his

A girl with long black hair 

and with piercing blue eyes

staring straight into his soul

"Who are you?" he asks.

Silence.

Then the girl`s starts glowing white 

Crystal white wings shoot from her back

"I am," she says

"I am your Mystic Angel." 

Author's Note

I just thought that I would do something with my name in it

Reviews

[MrKnowAll]

It was really fun to read . At the first time I assumed the boy was possessed by his mystic angel , but apparently they are one entity. She is like his guardian angel, and where-ever he goes, she goes.

I really liked it but I only have one thing to mention "fog" and "mist" are not so different, making it like you repeat yourself. Perhaps change it to something that gives a silence mode..to work that secret theme mode.

[Night]

...sweet, love the crystal white wings....good description with a twist of suspense.