Fake as Plastic

because a friend of mine said that I was being fake and not real

When I first met you,we were really close

but as time went on you became distant

We stopped talking less and less

yet I saw you everyday

you said I was fake and cheap

just like a plastic doll

But last time I checked 

I didn't think that I was

You can't wrap me,

dress me, or even comb my hair

So,how am I like a plastic doll in your eyes? 

Author's Note

I was mad so I had to let it out

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Oh wow, this is deep and I can definitely sense your anger within the poem too. It's good to rant and release your stress of your problems. Writing helps me with a lot of things. Suprisingly, it helped me get me my current boyfriend. I wrote a poem that's posted on this website in fact, that I texted him and he asked me out maybe an hour or two later. Miracles happen! Back to your poem, losing a friend that you thought you knew so well that ends up being a brat hurts deep inside. I know what it feels like to have that friend that you were once inseperable with and then all of sudden you become distant. Things come in the way and time sadly slips out of your fingertips. With her calling you immature names, have you considered that she's somewhat jealous of you? That's what my daddy always suggests to me when someone doesn't like me out of the blue, when I'm a sweet person to everyone even if I dislike every single detail about them. I am just that kind of a person. Maybe she misses how close you two once were and she calls you names to draw in your attention and save the friendship? But that would also be an immature and stupid way to handle business. It's better to act mature about the situation and talk face-to-face. Though it might not be the best advice or suggestion, you could talk to your friend about why she keeps calling you 'fake' and 'cheap'? If she really doesn't give a reasonable answer, maybe you should get the hint that there's something about you that she really envies but doesn't want to show it. So therefore instead, she torches you with name-calling. Make her the loser at her own game! :) Great write.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

[Mystic_Angel]

Thanks

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're welcome :)