Pain

Pain

A Poem by Mystic_Angel
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inspired by my headache

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Pain is all I feel
Pain is always real
It is something nobody can escape from
It is something that always follows us

In the shadows 
in the light
no matter where you are it will find you
until you want to end it

So why don`t you end the pain?
I will tell you why
you enjoy it
you hate it yet love it

© 2012 Mystic_Angel


Author's Note

Mystic_Angel
I don`t want anyone taking this the wrong way by doing anything dangerous

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Woooow, this poem is disturbing but still somehow beautiful. The last few verses definitely are impactful because they actually had me asking myself if I was self-destructive lol. Anyway, I can appreciate the question of whether people like to make themselves suffer, subconsciously or not (a valid question considering how much people love drama and violence (in the form of movies/shows/etc., so do they search it out in real life?)) and I love how the poem’s “voice” starts out acting as the victim but then condemns himself/herself in the last stanza – at least that’s what I get from it haha.
So, overall, although I’m no poet, I think your poem is very well written.
Keep up the good work! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mystic_Angel

11 Years Ago

thanks :)
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I love pain only because its a sign that I'm still alive....I forgot where I learned that from O.o someone told me that in the hospital but yeah, pain is tough and you explained it awesomely :) Great job! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on December 27, 2012
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Mystic_Angel
Mystic_Angel

Natchez, MS



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I have been writing random fan-fiction for anime/manga for over a year, I even tried making a few original ones. Now I want to branch out and try new things like poetry and short stories. I enjoy watc.. more..

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