Holes

does it matter that it does not rhyme? ^^"

Holes in the street

Holes in the ground

Holes in ceiling 

Holes in everything we see

Holes within my mother

Holes within my father

Holes within all people that are

in this world

Holes cover everything that lies within the world

Holes in everyone

Holes within you

Holes within me

Author's Note

my first poem so please tell me anything

Reviews

[_]

Psssh, course not, poems don't always rhyme :) but that's cool, I like how you used a physical and then made it intangible oooo that's good! :D Great poem woot woot!

[Night]

...never thought of things this way...nice originality.:)

[Falling Leaf.]

Buongiorno,

Poems don't need to rhyme. Nicely done.

Arrivederci!

[Wolfwind]

A poem doesn't need rhyme, and I think what you've created here works well with out it. In your poem you have done well to bring us into the concept of holes. And you've accomplished that by tying it into that which you see around you. You have effectively carried the meaning of your poem through. So over all you did a really good job on your first poem! =)

Aaron